Persuasive Paragraph

X-box is so much better than other game systems. It is cheaper than Playstation. Most kids don’t have a lot of money. They for the most part can’t get a job because of the economy and their ages. Their parents don’t want to pay for something they wouldn’t even use. With the X-box you don’t have to get batteries for the controllers. Batteries are way expensive, and nobody wants to by batteries for their controllers. It goes back to kids don’t always have money and with no money they can’t even have a game system. That is why X-box is a way better game system than all the others.