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Deb is the best store to shop at it is better than al-Mart. It’s better because first of all it’s in the mall and second of all it has the cutest and cheapest clothes.Deb is way cheaper than Wal-Mart. You can go to Wal-Mart and buy a pair of pants for like 20 dollars well at Deb in the mall you go there and get pants for like 12 dollars. Deb is just a good store. They have all different sizes and styles and that’s what I like. In my own opinion I think that Deb is better because they have everything. They have cloths for people who are really skinny and have a hard time finding the right size and they have sizes for people who are bigger and can’t find a lot of cute cloths. That’s what I really like about Deb: they have a plus size selection where there is cute cloths for girls that are big. I noticed that a lot of the time in stores there are not a lot of plus size cloths and if there is then they are not as cute as the other cloths. See but in Deb everything is equal. They have the store divided. And that’s tight. That’s why Deb rocks.