Persuasive: Body Paragraphs

The most important human rights are education, equality and religion.

Education is very helpful to get a job and make a good living. People who are wealthy are usually the people that have a good education. Education is one of the main factors that people look at to hire an employee. With that said, your education is important to help in life skills and keeping a good job.

The second human right that is important is religion. So many people only live to fulfill their duty in religion. People have been killed just for having religion in their lives. The thing is so many people in the world today are religious. If you were to take that away people everywhere would be outraged. If it didn’t result in protest then people would resort to violence. The world would be in a war with people in their own country and maybe even with other countries. In some countries people have to believe in a certain religion. They don’t have a problem with it because they don’t want to be killed.

The last human right I think is important is equality. Everywhere in the world there is racism and countries hating countries. The thing is that people don’t want to be around or be associated with people with a different race or lifestyle. If people were equal in the world, there would be less war and contention. I think that the world would be a better place with people that were equal.

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