Persuasive: Body Paragraphs

I believe that all people should have Human Rights because they should have the freedom of speech, should be treated with equality, and everyone should be able to make their own choices.

My first reason for this belief is that I do think all humans should have the freedom of speech. We should be able to say what comes to our mind anywhere at anytime. When everyone has different opinions, they should be able to be heard. You should be able so say whether or not you agree or disagree. If you don’t agree with a person’s actions or the way something is happening that affects your lifestyle, then let it be heard. When the elections happen, you have the right to put up for a debate and have the right to fight for what you believe in. Your voice can be heard to either have them persuaded or just for the understanding of how you feel.

My second reason for this belief is that every individual should be treated with equality. Your judgment on others shouldn’t be based on the race of someone or the color of their skin. It shouldn’t matter if you’re from a certain area or not. Every human has the same feelings, has the same opportunities as everyone else. There shouldn’t be certain jobs given to a male or female. Everybody has the same capabilities. Nobody should favor males more then females or females more than males. We are all equal!

My third reason for this belief is that everyone should be able to make their own choices. You should be able to choose your religion. You shouldn’t have to go to some religion you don’t believe in. Another choice every human should be able to make, no matter where they live, is that we should be able to decide how or who we build relationships with and let the public accept it. It shouldn’t matter if there’s relationships between man and man, woman and woman, or woman and man. Everyone has their own choices that should be accepted. In our world everyone should be able to decide what they want and how they want it.

Maryssa

1 Comments to “Persuasive: Body Paragraphs”

Aaron (March 26, 2010 at 8:14 AM)

I can really agree with this. I really love how you believe in everyone and how you state, basically, how to keep your chins up.