Victorious?
Wars desire, death thee,
We show want of life, free,
But ever need for war.
Trained in the moment,
To others show our worth, we,
Upon our dying ever day.
In the moment of naming,
Victors a good name yes,
Shall we ever view differ.
In the world, us its feed,
Unto the world show death,
Ever naturally are we there.
In ours of the dark veil,
We see past essences in,
Until the day claims, we,
Shall I ever be with thee, o’death.
Anthony
4 Comments to “Victorious?”
Anonymous (March 12, 2010 at 8:16 AM)
There are many types of poems. I like the way you put yours. You write different than really anyone here. Its great.
Casey
jessica (March 19, 2010 at 7:44 AM)
i liked this one. it was well written good job :)
Anonymous (March 19, 2010 at 7:54 AM)
this poem is great i like the way you wrote it its kinda out there for teenagers but you did a great job
Samm :) (March 19, 2010 at 7:58 AM)
this is way cool you have a great voice inside of you. you should let it out a lot more anthony :)
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