Anger

Anger is red
It sounds like a atomic bomb going off in your head
It tastes like a bitter sweet, unripe lemon
It smells like copper almost the metallic smell of blood
Anger feels like a thousand pins and needles driven into your limbs.



Wade

Posted on Friday, March 12, 2010 by Matthew, under .

8 Comments to “Anger”

April (March 12, 2010 at 8:02 AM)

Hate is strong. I liked your poem. I can relate it to me for every time I get mad.

Aaron (March 12, 2010 at 8:02 AM)

I like your use of similies to describe anger and what it truly feels like.

Samm (March 12, 2010 at 8:10 AM)

this is dead on. i hate hate but i need it to survive, we all do. I can relate to this 100% its powerful i like it a lot. Samm

Dallas (March 12, 2010 at 12:40 PM)

dang dude. this is really good.
i love this part.
"The passion that thrills
Hate the daily pain
The pain that has no gain"

Casey (March 19, 2010 at 8:04 AM)

I like your poem. It is really good.

chris (March 19, 2010 at 9:29 AM)

i like your poem good job

Stefany (April 16, 2010 at 7:55 AM)

I think anger is excatlly what you said. And the last part its true it hurts to hate because your hurting yourself

felipe (April 16, 2010 at 7:57 AM)

Wade this poems sick, and I completely agree with you. Not only does it do all that but I think, it blinds us to all good emotions. Good poem.

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