Hints of commitment, affection, and loyalty
Bringing you into a relationship hoping to show you the light.
Teardrops will soak into the cheek
While the heart starts cracking, but not shattered completely through.
Anxiety will overcome you with impure thoughts
And slowly your soul will become sick and weak.
Sunshine will turn to a blur
The flowers will lose its scents,
My hopes and dreams withering away
Just hoping and wishing I was still with her.
Maryssa
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Maryssa.
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jessica (March 19, 2010 at 7:46 AM)
this poem is awesome and sad. i can relate to this
Anthony (March 19, 2010 at 7:46 AM)
If it is to work between you and her, then it will most likely happen.
I, however, think you became a bit too connected to her. I hope you feel better soon.
mike (March 19, 2010 at 7:52 AM)
i like this poem a lot i feel your emotion like it was my own this poem is great good job
Samm :) (March 19, 2010 at 8:12 AM)
I absolutely love reading your poetry you use really great words and your poems stand out to me alot and inspire me. your a good thinker :)
Aaron (March 19, 2010 at 8:13 AM)
I really enjoyed this poem. I feel like I can really relate to it and make a connection.
trent v (March 19, 2010 at 12:23 PM)
i like how you use metaphors to make your poem stand out.
Casey (April 16, 2010 at 7:43 AM)
I liked this poem because your good at wording things. It's perfect.
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