I loath you!!! [With all my black heart]
Your so stupid girl stupid and fake!!
Shut up and use your real voice for fucks sake!
Leave me alone I can’t stand to look at you
People hate you, not my fault; it’s the cards you drew
Why can’t you speak your damn mind?
I can’t wait to leave your sorry ass behind
This is not innocence that escapes your horrid lips
Lets tear out your evil heart and cut it into bloody strips
Deep down all I see is an introvert little bitch
Screw you I’m gone leave my soul in your backyard ditch
Samm
6 Comments to “I loath you!!! [With all my black heart]”
Anthony (March 19, 2010 at 7:59 AM)
Very aggressive. A little less swearwords would make others a little more meaningful. Who is it that you would wish you malice upon?
Robbie (March 26, 2010 at 7:35 AM)
very very powerful and kinda violent. but it gets the point across very clear. i like the powerfulness and the anger of your emotions. it was easy to feel how you feel so i liked reading it.
Maryssa (March 26, 2010 at 7:57 AM)
Samm, wow that's intense. I think the words you used could be the only ones to get your point across. I thought it was a great poem, but can I ask where all this anger is hidden?
mike (March 26, 2010 at 8:08 AM)
I like this poem a lot I kinda feel that your not talking so much to someone else but about your self i hope that you can get through things if it is about you good job.
brenden (March 26, 2010 at 10:57 AM)
I think that with your swearing it helps people to take you seriously about what your talking about and expressing.
Casey (April 16, 2010 at 7:51 AM)
I like your poem. But I hope that if it is about you then you won't let it hold you back.
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