Happiness

Happiness is sunny yellow
It sounds like a baby cooing
It tastes like fresh strawberries
It smells like fresh ocean water
Happiness feels like endless softness


Stefany

Posted on Friday, March 12, 2010 by Matthew, under .

8 Comments to “Happiness”

Aaron (March 12, 2010 at 7:59 AM)

I like the way you used similies to describe happiness. I think it really works out well.

Samm :) (March 19, 2010 at 8:04 AM)

this is cute :) im glad to read a happy poem for once in my life lol :) i love it. why don't you rub some happiness on me?

Casey (March 19, 2010 at 8:06 AM)

Your poem is really cool. I liked it.

eddie (March 19, 2010 at 10:51 AM)

this is a really good poem dude :p

trent v (March 19, 2010 at 12:29 PM)

i think you should of used something else then a baby cooing because baby cry more then they smile. but every thing else is good.

Robbie (March 26, 2010 at 7:37 AM)

Short and sweet is exactly this poem. I love the personification you gave to happiness. A great use of words like strawberries and cooing. a really happy and sweet poem.

Sergio Burciaga (April 16, 2010 at 8:13 AM)

I like this poem because it's really cute and put a smile on my face.

billy (April 17, 2010 at 5:43 PM)

mm-mm strawberries they really do make me happy

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