Dining Alone
Sorrow and agony flowed down her cheeks
Her, gazing at the stars
Trying to find the gold at the end of the rainbow.
Wishing hearts didn’t shatter, didn’t tear, didn’t break, didn’t beat, didn’t willow Away.
Emotions are trickling with the rain…
Fastly coming down and slowly drying up.
White turns to black, pink turns to a deep red, while green hardens to a lonesome blue.
Her heart hearkens for the clouds to fade away,
The rain to stop!
Again, looking for that gold at the end of the colorful rainbow.
-Maryssa
7 Comments to “Dining Alone”
Aaron (March 12, 2010 at 7:58 AM)
I really love the emotion that you put into colors. Using them as an example to express emotions of sadness. I think it's really cool.
mike (March 12, 2010 at 8:00 AM)
i really like this poem i think we all feel like that at some point in our life.
Anthony (March 12, 2010 at 8:08 AM)
Reading the peom, what makes you so sad? "Sorrow and agony flowed down her cheeks", why are you crying?
Do you understand the emotions before they leave?
Who left you and why was it so bad?
Anonymous (March 12, 2010 at 8:13 AM)
Great poem. You look like you can get some good emotions on paper.
Casey
Robbie (March 12, 2010 at 10:51 AM)
the colors are like the emotions.. the lighter the brighter the darker the (whatever is darker than dark) ?? ha but great poem my fav
cornellias (March 12, 2010 at 11:05 AM)
that is a really good poem and I liked it.
trent v (March 19, 2010 at 12:26 PM)
i say you put your poems on more blogs and let your emotions spread.. really good.
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