Chains.
By Mike
Chains that Lock and Chains that Bind,
Not Outside but in the Mind.
You can’t see them but you know their there.
They don’t leave cuts or bruises but you feel their strain,
They don’t clank or rattle and people don’t know about the battle,
That takes place within that you can never win.
Take it for what you want but,
They are Chains that Lock and Chains that Bind,
Not Outside but in the Mind.
8 Comments to “Chains.”
Aaron (March 19, 2010 at 7:56 AM)
I really like the way you involved emotions in this poem. I can truly tell that all of us struggle with these chains you speak of.
Casey (March 19, 2010 at 7:57 AM)
Geez. Your poems are all so deep. But I like them.
edgardo (March 19, 2010 at 7:59 AM)
thats is very true ur mind can go through alot, this is a great poem mike
Anthony (March 19, 2010 at 8:01 AM)
These types of chains are everywhere, though it seems to me.
It's deep and I wonder what these chains are holding back.
jessica (March 19, 2010 at 8:07 AM)
i agree with anthony i wonder whats behind them. this poem is true and its awesome
Samm (March 26, 2010 at 7:53 AM)
damn, that was way good i like it a lot. your poems are f****** deep :)
Maryssa (March 26, 2010 at 7:55 AM)
Mike, that is so true. Sometimes you can be strained but not always physically. I can definately relate in so many different ways with alot of your poems. Great job dude!
Pablo L (March 26, 2010 at 12:48 PM)
thats good G . Doing good.
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