Away
That was the life I knew
Feeling lost and all alone
The Black Hole feels as
It grows day by day
Despite all this
I’ve never felt so
Jubilee
Here and right now
The songs of Change
Whistle their lovely
Rhythm
In my disobedient brain
Everything seems to fade
And yet I’ve never felt
Closer…
Black Holes
Who Am I?
Who will be there?
Love.
The answer is unknown even to that Black Hole
Will I be invisible?
Will they be there?
No, Yes.
Be gone Black Hole.
I will be back one day.
Black Hole
I don’t want to fear
Those who love
-Aaron
5 Comments to “Away”
tim (March 12, 2010 at 10:41 AM)
aaron, man, you are good but come on you can do better than that. find your true self and then write it...
Nick (March 12, 2010 at 12:43 PM)
Aaron i think that you can dig deeper and come out with better thing that write about just try to dig deeper then write like Tim said.
Maryssa (March 19, 2010 at 7:40 AM)
Aaron, I agree with the whole black hole thing. I know I felt, and sometimes still do, that I was in a black hole. I was trapped. You shouldn't fear those who love. I know I still do and it's sad. Great poem dude!
mike (March 19, 2010 at 7:50 AM)
i really like this poem i ask myself simular questions all the time and i cant give you the answer becouse i still havent figured it out for my self
stefany (March 26, 2010 at 7:55 AM)
i really like this poem i also ask myself the same questions but then i cant find the answers
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