Persuasive: Final Draft
Iphone
(case manager, tracker, judge)
Buy one get everything else free? Sounds like a deal to me. Think about having your cell phone, music, movies, and games all in one. It’s called an iphone, some of the best technology available to us today. And let’s not forget about web access. Even though many phones have it, they’re still no where near as fast as an iphone. Imagine having the world wide web in you pocket.
There is a couple of reasons why I think iphones are better than most phones. Thy have a lot of memory. They’re useful and efficient, plus they have a lot of different accessories. A lot of memory is an important feature. Most phones only have the required memory, iphones aren’t just your cell phones, unlike others. They hold your music, movies, games, photos, and to top it off Internet.
iphones are useful and efficient. Now days they use a lot of technology. Imagine having your cell phone, music, movies and games all together. I know I wouldn’t mind it. Not having to carry all those items would certainly make it easier.
At the time being, iphones are pretty popular. There is many different kind of accessories which are available. For example car chargers, you wouldn’t have to worry about your phone dying. Even though iphones are fragile, they have all kinds of cases for protection. They even have some you can use while exercising. Another item would be ihomes. If you think about it, they’re very efficient. Instead of buying different cds you can just plug it in and have thousands of your favorite songs and have them just one button away.
So I’m pretty sure what you should do is obvious. It cost way too much money to buy everything individually. Hopefully I have opened your eyes, to see what a great investment an iphone is. Not only will you be satisfied, but you will save money too. So what are you waiting for?
Eddie
3 Comments to “Persuasive: Final Draft”
Anonymous (October 19, 2009 at 10:27 PM)
You did a great job clearly stating your key claim in this persuasive piece. Your reasons were precise and your purpose was effectively conveyed. I think your piece would be even stronger if went into more detail about the costs of an iphone. You could tell the audience the price of the phone and then give an estimate of the cost of songs or applications available for the phone. Then, you could use this specific evidence to support your claim of what a wise purchase an iphone is compared to buying all of the other pieces of technology separately.
joey (October 23, 2009 at 9:08 AM)
1.An iphone.
2.lots of memory,pretty popular
3.I think that The iphone is a cool phone.
Fernando Soto (October 23, 2009 at 12:40 PM)
eddie you are so right, an i phone is a great investment. and you can do anything on it its nows technology in your hand!!
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