Persuasive: Final Draft
Ford Mustang
Tracker, Case Worker, or Judge
Matt,
I am completely for the Ford Mustang. In my opinion it’s a great car for many reasons. In this letter I hope I can convince you the Mustang is a great car with a few of these reasons.
First, the Ford Mustang has many accessories that make it look nice. One of these accessories is speakers. Not only do they look nice, but they also sound better than stock speakers. Another accessory is the body kits. The body kits give the mustang an original look.
Second, the Mustang is a Ford product. The Ford Company cuts prices a lot of the time. Another great quality of Ford’s company is they aren’t as other, more popular dealerships such as Toyota and Corvette.
Finally, Gabe doesn’t like Mustangs. He absolutely hates Ford. He calls then F.O.R.D, found on road dead. He doesn’t like the gas mileage, but it’s great for sports and muscle cars. He complains about the Mustang’s price, but he wants a more expensive car.
Now that you know my stand on the Mustang, I hope we see eye to eye. If you agree with me then great, if not oh well. Though my recommendation is to get out there and stop complaining about Fords. So there’s what I think.
Sam
9 Comments to “Persuasive: Final Draft”
joey (October 9, 2009 at 9:39 AM)
1.his opinion is that it is a great car for many reasons.
2.Ford does take a lot of mileage.
3.I agree ford sucks.
Anonymous (October 11, 2009 at 8:28 PM)
Okay so I am ready for you to convince me. Maybe if you included a little more detail.. like how exactly do they sound,do they rock your world? Is it like being there in person? What does a body kit do? I have never heard of one so if you could explain it to me, I would appreciate it.Thanks.
Why do you suppose that Ford cuts their prices? Basically Sam although I think you did a pretty good job I am not quiet convinced, but I would be if you included a few more details. Hope you are having a nice day.
Kyla at CSU
Gabe (October 23, 2009 at 7:36 AM)
Hi Sam i think your a really good writer i love how you make fun of Gabe its funny HA HA HA
Aaron (October 23, 2009 at 7:44 AM)
You mention several reasons for why you like it. for instance the speakers, body kit, and that you like Ford. However, you bring in some other opinion by someone else which makes it confusing on what you really believe. Again however I agree with where you stand.
Jeremy (October 23, 2009 at 8:12 AM)
So i like Good accessories as well as you do. I like cheap things cause i am a poor kid ha. I like to piss people off to ha ha
bonni (October 23, 2009 at 10:37 AM)
lol that is cool i also love the look of the mustangs they are neat cars ha ha. i like the fact that they do get good gas mileage and at the same time most girls think that they are sexy cars! lol they have also been around for years and have just improved! ....bon
Brandi (October 23, 2009 at 10:57 AM)
I love Mustangs. They are very great cars so agree with all three points. I didn't understand what you put something about Gabe in there but oh well. Your essay was good you gave the readers facts and opinions and you kept your point.
ava (October 23, 2009 at 12:29 PM)
1. ford mustang
2. cheap, look nice
3.put things in there that make seance
jake j (October 23, 2009 at 12:54 PM)
1. that he likes cars.
2. that its a grate car, they look nice, and its better with the stock.
3. i think that he is ubset eith cars.
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