Persuasive: Final Draft

Dear Friends

Which is better, Wal-mart or Target? That’s kind of a dumb question, huh? Of course Wal-mart is better than Target. Wal-mart is the bomb. Everyone shops at Wal-mart. If you don’t shop at Wal-mart then your lame. Word! My favorite color is red but when it comes to Wal-mart and Target I’m blued up from the root up. Do you want an explanation for why I like Wal-mart so much more than target? Here’s a few reasons.

Wal-mart is better than Target for many reasons. Wal-mart is just tight. One reason that I like Wal-mart is because they are everywhere. I would take an educated guess and say that there is more than a hundred times more Wal-marts in The United States than there is Targets. There is a Wal-mart in almost every town across the U.S.A. And if there isn’t a Wal-mart in your hometown then there is probably one in the town next to yours. Targets on the other hand are rare and hard to find. And one thing that makes me like Wal-mart more than Target is the fact that there is a Wal-mart in my home town, but there isn’t a Target within twenty miles of my town.

Another reason why Wal-mart is tight is because they have everything. And not only do they have everything, they have a wide variety of brands of all there products. Target usually has very small variety of stuff compared to the variety that Wal-mart has. On top of that Wal-mart is reliable when it comes to having there products in stock. I have hardly ever had an experience where I went to Wal-mart to get something and they were sold out of that product. But it seems like Target is always sold out of stuff and it takes them for ever to re-stock with there products. I feel much more confident that I will find what I am looking for when I go to Wal-mart.

Wal-mart has really good brands and yet they are a lot cheaper than Target. And Target has lame no-name brands. Wal-mart has really good clothes such as Dickies, sweats, shoes, hats, and cool logo shirts.

There is a lot more reasons to shop at Wal-mart and not Target, but I don’t have enough time to write about all of the reasons. Basically what I’m trying to say in this letter is that Wal-mart is sick. Shop at Wal-mart and not Target.

Kayden