Persuasive: Final Draft
Subway vs Mcdonalds
Americans love food. It’s that simple. Most Americans love take out food, which is why a lot of us are over weight. I am here to tell you why Subway is better take out food than Mcdonalds.
Did you know that only 50% of a Mcdonalds hamburger is beef? The other half is the leftover parts from animals, like what is put in a hotdog. Also, in a Mcdonalds veggie burger about half of it is meat. So, you fast food vegaterians out there are getting ripped off. At Subway it is all 100% of what it says it is. And you vegaterians don’t have to worry about any hidden proteins because you can watch the people make your sandwich. This also means that you don’t have to worry about people spitting in your food.
Freedom of choice is another thing that Americans love. At Subway you get to choose exactly what’s on your sandwich. At Mcdonalds you have to pay to take off anything that comes on the sandwich. You don’t have to worry about taking off anything you don’t like at Subway because you choose what goes on your food and it’s not like you’re going to put on anything that you don’t like.
Why does America have such a weight problem? Because of fattening, greasy foods like what places such as Mcdonalds gives you. Just about everything from Mcdonalds is deep fried. Food like that is highly likely to clog your arteries with fat and kill you. At Subway though none of the food is deep fried and you’re less likely to die from a heart attack.
In conclusion Subway is better than Mcdonalds because it’s real food, you choose what goes on your sandwich, and it’s much healthier than Mcdonalds deep fried death wish. So, eat Subway!
Sena
7 Comments to “Persuasive: Final Draft”
Anonymous (October 23, 2009 at 7:54 AM)
I agree. subyay has lots better tasting and good for you food. GO SUBWAY!!!!!
Mike F.
Jeremy (October 23, 2009 at 8:04 AM)
Ha, so what I think that I am poor and lots of the time I can't eat a good meal like that. But I love the food that Subway has!
Sommer (October 23, 2009 at 9:16 AM)
I do agree with your paper Mcdonalds is disgusting and greasy food. Subway all the way here! If they closed down mcdonalds for at least a month I bet americans would start losing weight! Personally I can't stand Mcdonalds food.
bonni (October 23, 2009 at 10:31 AM)
hey girl thats awesome i never would of thought lol about micky ds ha ha i love that place but you just opend my eyes with the truth! its crazy about the things that they put in there burgers its really gross if you just think about t lol and i also like the freedom of choice you threw in there that was smart cause its so so true! love bon
stefany (October 23, 2009 at 11:06 AM)
point 1, not real food. Point 2 freedom of choice. Point 3 weight problem. I agree Mcdonalds does not have real food its all frozen or liquid stuff. Subway is a great place to get it how you want. And America does have weight problems maybe if we start eating more healthy and stop being lazy to cook our own food we wouldn't be fat. I think your essay is really good it convinced me to eat at subway. You should say what your going to talk about in your first paragraph.
Anonymous (October 23, 2009 at 11:07 AM)
1.fifty percent is not real meet i think that is pretty disgusting.
2.Freedom of choice yeah there is a freedom of choice but sometimes there is really not.
3. weight americans are getting heavier and heavier subway would help if thats where they would go.
I think you can improve by writting more.But other than that good punction
Ashley h
Rickey (October 23, 2009 at 12:19 PM)
I like your three main points like that micyds burgers arn't that we love choosing what you want at that micyds kills us but your talking to little kids remember so chill
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